Improvements On Draft

Because this is my is my first draft there are area which need to be improved. From my feedback I need to :

Digipak:

• The bold colours I intend on using may cover my synergy which needs to be seen. 
• The font may be a little hard to read due to the bright colours at the background - I have to either make it stand out more or change the font.
• Make sure all elements are added such as website and record label or labels.
• When I start to do it I must be careful that the picture doesn't look stretched. 

Advert:

• I should think about making the title stand out more by making it bigger compared to the artists name.
• The use of too many colours may be distracting from the main purpose to sell the album.
• Again the font may be hard to read with so many bright colours in the background. 
• I have to make sure I insert a date of release.